Nice work. I love the first stanza, but I aslo like the way you've said:
"I find the strength,
to live today," very inspiring, thank you.
5/5
*VioletRaven*

I to just live in waiting for death to release me of my pain. an amazing read, another favourite of mine. well done

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

Now that is a poem!good job

That's really beautiful! It kinda reminds me of a few of my friends. Great job!

-Aera-

I really liked this poem. I can relate to what you are saying. I love the imagery and the style is very effective for the topic. Keep it up. Nik