by Fallengod667 Oct 31, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Look in my past, |
by VioletRaven
A dark poem indeed, but I can also see elements of hope, you mention friends and things you hold dear, never forget about them. I also love the way you address the reader directly, so they become very involved in the poem. |
by jennifer
This poem was really amazing I loved reading every single line 5/5 |