You made me speechless...too good...to be true...are you for real...duh! Can't believe it...you are truly gifted...okey...so sorry...I think I can't comment on your works anymore...nah...just kidding...it doesn't need my comments...It's a masterpiece...
But if that ever happens,
I will leave behind these,
So when you read all this,
Believe the words, please.

Now...do you believe me..:P

Wonderful i loved it....you made me speechless..great......I Love your writtings.....All My Love...JOclyn

Wow absolutely amazing. I don' know how you do it but wow..you're sensational. so the poem was undoubtedly a masterpiece...but i hope oyu don't feel so blue all the time.
take care xoxo

Hey, i really luved this poem, i really liked the end verse, i thought it sounded gr8 n the overall flow of this poem is amazingly simple and, i think, fluid.

i really liked this verse as well,

I was a warrior,
Strong as can be,
Now just a wounded soldier,
Drowning in the sea.

gr8 work, as always! keep goin.

xXx