When i saw you

by Felix   Oct 31, 2005


From the instant i saw you
i burned desire
i knew that i needed you
the way your soft ahir fell down your back
the way you smiled
i new that no matter what you ahd to be mine
and so tomorrow
i will do all it takes to amke you see
that you need me to

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thats also very sweet.. its got a few spelling errors, but you can always fix those! this was all about your love, and emotion, and it really shined through! nice descriptions and imagery, i could see this girl with hair falling down her back by the way you described her.. good job! keep writing! :)

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