One time

by Cortney   Oct 31, 2005


One time he told me
that i am lovely, good, and real.
that i am beautiful inside
If only he knew,
how that made me feel.

One time he told me
that my mind is quick, sharp,
and full of whit.
That i should keep on trying,
and never quit.

One time he told me,
how he loved and needed me,
how my smile is filled with hope
and my spirit sets him free.
how my eyes shine full of light, and
how good he feels when he holds me tight

So i had a talk with myself
just me nobody else,
because it was time,
That i listened

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  • 19 years ago

    by richard

    The poem was good except for the ending it could've been better. but you're a really lucky girl it sounds like that guy really loves you and cares about you.

  • 19 years ago

    by tasha

    I see you have no comment so ill be the 1st n.eways i kno how you feel i lost my 1st because he cheated but now im dating his brother im in love w/his brother and him so my heart is thron in two by brothers and i dont kno what 2 do well t2yl oh iloved your poem 2 t2yl;shorty