I see you have no comment so ill be the 1st n.eways i kno how you feel i lost my 1st because he cheated but now im dating his brother im in love w/his brother and him so my heart is thron in two by brothers and i dont kno what 2 do well t2yl oh iloved your poem 2 t2yl;shorty

The poem was good except for the ending it could've been better. but you're a really lucky girl it sounds like that guy really loves you and cares about you.