Awwww, really beautiful poem.
5/5 - definately
Your choice of words are really good, it's sad but ends in a really sweet way.
well done.

xxx cici xxx

Awwness!!!! Geo!! Incredible!!! Absolutely incredible!!!!

Jesus that was great...

Nearly made me cry!!

I loved the whole story plot line thingy...and the way you rhymed was unbelievable.

Stunning work of art, m'dear.

Wow. that is so sad, but i kno excaty wat u mean, excet i am not dead, and i havent found ne1 2 make me feel good. anyway...wow...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Very heart felt poem. excellent details. thanks for your comment

Aww hun this poem is so beautiful and touching great job! xox

The most beautiful poem I have ever read, it touched my heart....I wish I was an Angel up above free from this life and pain....You did an amazing job sweety. keep it up..

*Much Love Sabrina*

Wow that was amazing str8 frm d heart!!! it made tears well up in my eyes!!! 5/5 defin8ly

Very well expressed. I think we all deserve the so called "love" we are all waiting for in this society.

((((Big HugS))))

Michelle

This poem was amazing. keep writing i really liked this.

That is an awsome poem! hi you dont know me...but i know who you are believe it or not. Sierra talks about you...ok that was all random anyway great poem lattaz

Awesome poem hun...
we all have an angel...i hope.
A really heart touching and beautiful piece..
take care of urself xoxoxx

That is amazing! i love it-xxx-

You made me cry , that was the most beautiful poem in the world ... thank you

Allison

You made me cry , that was the most beautiful poem in the world ... thank you

Allison

I can so relate to what you have written. I tried to kill myself a lot and in the end it was only him who could save me. He is everyting I have ever needed. Hang on to him he will get you through.

I thought this was a very sweet poem. very deep too.

Holy mother of god, that is the most amazing poem I have ever read... Thats so... deep, yet clear.. sad, yet not...
I am amazed...

This was an EXCELLENT poem i love every line great job and always keep it up!!!!
Leona

Wow....this is a beatiful poem, I'm very impressed, thank you for writing such a wonderful work of art. 5/5

Holy mother cracker! look at all the comments you've got!! A sign of a tremendous poem! GO YOU! WOOT!