Really good, very powerful, your emotion is very clear.
Good choice of words, glad your past all that now though !!

xxx cici xxx

I really enjoyed this short but very deep poem and am glad your better now 5/5
Jennifer

Whoa thats awesome, sad, dark, but yes, very awesome, I loved your rhyming and structure great job and thanks for the comment,

Jess

Awesome
i like it
~HazE

Great job.. it made me cry.. 5/5