This is kinda hybrid form of literature where its typically song/poem tandem, the metre is good, was a bit inconsistent though as to lines count per stanza, and rhymings...but u go girl, u have the power to express emotions in simply writing them down. You easily relate to your readers, tactless it could be, maybe cuz of ur age, but it sounded well reigned in. As a whole, this poem conveys a message a question too familiar in life but tough to answer, well, I hope it was all fictional for if not, it denotes pessimism and for a young girl like you, a budding rosebud, it is not advisable to think negatively. I will continue to read and rate ur works as I find more time. I use to give honest feedback that enhances more of our craft in a constructive way. I wonder how is it when u reached my age, you could have been a well-acclaimed poetess by then. Cheers. LoadsofLove, chitcyn