Our Love

It has good flow. But no stucture. I think this is better. If your going to rhyme lay it out, For example:
I did not know where to start,
even though were far apart

It is hard for you and I
to see each other in the eye

even though were not together
our love will still last forever

My love to you is true
even when it makes me blue

this love i share with you
is hard for me to tell
that I really do love you!!!!!!
and it will do nothing but swell

this is a example of how I would have laid it out. But all and all good poem