Broken

by Brittany   Nov 1, 2005


I'm so broken
and i don't know what to do
so broken
all because of you
you lifted me up
to watch me fall
you wanted me then
but now you don't want me at all
would you make up your mind
because your hurting me
do what you can
just stop it please
the pain is so great
i cannot bear
you not thinking
this isn't fair
as i write this poem
i can not see
because my tears of pain
are blinding me
ill wipe them away
just one more time
as i remind my self
why i write this rhyme

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  • I love your work!! such a heartfelt powerful poem. great job
    courtie x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by fallen angel

    It has a good rhyming scheme, i really like the way you split up the lines and made it flow