by lostlllsoul Nov 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Baby hold me close |
by Mezmeryz
Hey this poem is real good and real sweet!! i love your poetry keep writin too!!;) thanx for your comment... |
Hmm...this one is full of passion...very beautiful...but I think you can make it better...adding more words...put in more feelings... |