by LettersFromEnnis Nov 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Im trapped inside this room |
by NannO
Gud effort... u started off rhyming, then dropped it, wich kinda threw me off coz i was expecting some sort of rhyme.. but, its still gud, in fact, i kinda lykd the nonrhyming parts more than those that did... in the part wer u say "is it too much I ask for" i think u shud change it to "is it too much to ask for"... |