Comments : You Promised Me Forever

  • 19 years ago

    by dora

    0h t0uching p0em, very heartfelt. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. h0pe y0u`re 0hk. g0od j0b!
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 19 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    WOw..grEat poeM u havE tHere!!~ very nice aNd very tOuchiNg iNdeEd!! ~ ^^ 5/5 cHeEr uP ~ if u doNt miNd,visit my pOetriEs tOo !~ ^^

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    That was so beautiful and so true
    i really liked keep up the good work
    i still feel the same i wrote my poem
    called forever is not promised so when you get a chance take a look at my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thanks
    Love
    JAYma
    aka
    100%lovehurts!!

  • 19 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    Wonderful poem, i love reading a poem like urs that i can realate to so well done and thankyou
    keep up the brill work
    take care xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Flawless flow revealing the pain of a broken heart it is a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Oh I feel sorry for u
    this poem is so good and is a 5
    keep up

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael

    Wow....that closing line was amazing!! Sometimes "forevers" aren't all they're built up to be...Just remember that people come into our lives for a reason...even if that reason is only to learn from them...never forget to find the lesson in every situation...and keep your head up! Excellent job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcus

    I Enjoy reading your work ,I love your rhyme shceme.

  • 19 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The love might but the guilt never ends. 5/5/ again.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    Great poem! i feel the exact same way...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    So sad!!!!!!!! well written though.keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This was a good poem. I liked it!

    -Taylor

  • Hey just remember that it never ends...i loved the poems keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Nice work, i understand, hmm not sure what to say hehe but good job xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha klukas

    This is a really good poem me and ma boyfriend broke up and it was becuz he wanted my goddaughters mother it hurt so bad.....really nice

  • 18 years ago

    by makayla

    Thx 4 the comment ,,, ii love this its cute but sad ... ii kno how you feel ... guys never stay real

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    I know how you fell in this poem, your are absolutely terrifc writer! keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is a really good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by sarayu

    Omg...wat do i say nw...awsum?superb?..keep it up !!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Simply WOW.......
    amazing poem. so heartfelt.
    good job dear.5/5