by Libby Nov 1, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
If these feelings I have, |
by StandStill
Amazing poem. great potential! <3 |
by Kyle Schulz
That was awesome. Your phrasing and rhyming was great. I am sure allot of people can totally relate to this poem. I can tell that when you wrote this you were feeling emtions very strongly. Your poem is very pure and raw. It doesn't hold back anything and that is why it is good. Keep it up, you have very good potential. |