Your amazing, the words you use are incredible and the way you use them are so great

Orange tongue,
Illuminating our lives,
Fighting off the darkness,
This black veil,
The veil that covers all,

that was the best part to me at least 5/5

Wow, that was really good. it was very descriptive and totally kool. thanks for the comment on my poem.
-Suzie

Powerful image...you gotta love that candle right? Lol. X