by Bug1219 Nov 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My storm is inside of me |
I love this poem! you did an amazing job with showing your emotions the ending was great 5/5 <33 |
by Kaila
I liked the ending |
Wonderful job. the flow was good and your emotions were strong.. keep it up :D |
by Jessica
Aww.. this was good.. i loved the descriptions and wording you used.. it really added flavor to the poem.. the only thing is the flow.. it didn't work very well.. nice try though.. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
I love this poem. |