My Lucky Number: 333

by .Just Jessie.   Nov 1, 2005


My life is filled
With so much pain
I'll cut a slice
For relief to gain

People yell at me
So I'll cut some more
Now I'm up to
Cut twenty-four

Home is prison
I try to hide
I dig in deeper
To reveal cut forty-nine

School sucks
I'm failing at life and this too
Just one more time won't hurt
I go for cut sixty-two

You leave me
Alone and barely alive
I haven't done it in a while
So I find a spot for ninety-five

Keep on with life
And all between
Gets harder everyday
Here comes cut two-seventeen

It's all done now
No one would help me
So now my life ends with the final cut
Number three hundred thirty-three

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very good peice, very full of feelings and choise of vocab is very good and descriptive

    (btw although i pushed 4 i ment 5, not sure how that happened)

    5/5