Beautiful wonderful poem babe, ur words are so sweet. I could keep reading this poem forever.

Love u,

ur gurl,

pj xxx

I think this is a beautiful write, it touched me greatly. though i think there're some typo errors.
like,

'Pulls you closer and tells it will be alright'

'...tells you it will be alright'

the first few lines are really great, it flows wonderfully, but i think the flow kind of go off in the middle. but still,maybe it's just me. =D

anyway, just my point of view. i still think this is lovely, if a guy can write this for me.... that'll be... heaven. lol.