Why? (Cutting)

by ChristinaMichelle   Nov 1, 2005


Why Gurlie.
Why did you do that?
Why cant you just stop?
Cant you see what your doing?
Your hurting yourself and me.
Gurlie I need you.

Yesterday, you showed me your leg.
Why did you do that?
Is it because of me?
Please STOP!

The other day, I was wotching the news.
They showed this gurl, she killed herself.
She couldnt stop cutting.
Come to think about it....
It was you.

Damn, I wish I could have done something.
Everyday I look outside.
I find myself thinkin about you.
Why couldnt I have been there 4 you?
Why couldnt I get you to stop?
Why didnt I see how much you was hurting?

Why didnt I take that pain away?
Why you and not me?
Why,Why,Why..........

I Love You McKenzie!

Christina

I wrote this about my bestfriend McKenzie. She wont stop cutting. No she's not dead but she will be if she doesnt stop.

Please leave a Comment, Rank, and Vote for my poem if you liked it. Im new at write so... I need all the help I can get.

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  • 18 years ago

    by todd

    Awsome my friend is cutting herself to and its killing me becuase i really care about her

  • 18 years ago

    by *sadbabe*

    Hey i also cut....but after 2 years of cutting and being hospitalized 4 times for almost killing myself im at the point that i want help. i know the hardest thing for your friend is that she dont wanna stop. it becomes such and addiction that you cant stop unless you really want to. if you want anymore help or advice im me on AIM my sn is pinkduckie393 or email is pinkduckie393@yahoo.com

    great job with your poem i really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Great job
    i do it too
    the bad thing is
    is no one trys to stop
    they liek it!!
    talk about caring friedns !!
    5/5
    gret job hun

  • 19 years ago

    by libby

    Please talk to your friend and let her know how much you care about her, if you haven't already. I've been in both your place and hers, and I know a listening and caring ear can make all the difference. There really is nothing better you can do for her. As for your writing, keep pouring out your feelings as you have, but if you feel like improving, the best advice I can give you is to work on organization a bit more.

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