Comments : The story of heart break

  • 19 years ago

    by AsTheCrowFlies

    Yess i think i inspired this one too...it's also awesome...just like all your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey this is a great and different style poem

    but spelling. para two. begining not begening.

    this had lots of emotion and it pulled at past experinces.

    i have felt like this b4. it does pass but when it first happens you just feel like the walls are caving in from all sides.

    i gave it a 5. excellent.

    David