Nice poem! I love it! Keep up the GREAT work!
~Sammy

I loved that poem.....Liz very NICE...Keep it up....Much Of My Love..Joclyn

Wow.. this is reli gud... i especially loved ur last stanza.. gr8 job
take care
thnx 4 ur comments
Nannoush

Your first stanza pulls me right in, it voices out a situation that happens so frequently. I can relate to this. Powerful write. I really like how you can make a poem flows so well. Yet again, I'm impressed by your last line. You can end a poem so well that left me pondering about it for awhile. Thanks for sharing. =)