Its really good - the flow is a bit difficult to follow, but its probably becuase thats the asthetic that you went for

Good poem and i can relate to what happened to you.

I actually really enjoyed reading thatone, it might be one fo ur best i think, well dun xx

Yeah, love is really confusing..and it really hurts. thanks for the comment. i realy appreciate it. i like the way you write... 5...definatley

laytur

This is so awesome. and im so sorry he broke your heart. please dont kill yourself im here for you, i promsie you that

Great poem.. i really loved it and you so talented!! mwaz stephy Xxx

Wow!! great poem!! i really liked it alot!! That really explains what basically happened to me just yesterday but, its all good now!! just a lil depressed but, thats what guys do to ya!! well keep up the good work!
Holly Renae!!

GREAT POEM I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!

It, is really good, but sometimes it gets confusing. But good job, it is really hard to write a poem that long and keep it good throughout.

I rlly rlly like this one
i know what you mean because that is basically wat happened with me
good luck with it and thanks for my comment