Hold on to 16

by libby   Nov 1, 2005


I shed sweet sixteen
like I slide off last night's dress.
Thanks for the great time,
but you didn't give me
all I wanted
from you.
I leave my year
on the floor,
separated from dignity,
discarded.
Don't worry, I took
lots of pictures.
I get closer and closer
to the dawn of adulthood,
and I will never wear
this dress again.
It will remain on the floor
for a little while,
until memories erode,
raw and painful.
I pack it up into
the closet.
Sweet sixteen has dissolved and
seventeen tastes sour.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Martyna

    This poem is more the excellent.
    Its super times infinity excellent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It didn't rhyme, but it still had a nice quality to it.

    Good Writing!
    beth