Excellent!
Nice start, great finish..

Keep 'em coming!

Wow, another stunning poem! i loved this one too, it felt almost as though i could have been there. take care,
lots of luv,
emma xxxxx

That's really amazing.... full of sadness.. but I could see where you're coming from when I read it.

definitely a 5/5 from me... great job + keep up the great poetry!

XoxoX,

Robin

Becky i hate u u r amazing at writing!!!

Well done becky. A great poem, so sad and emotional but well written with meaning
keep up the good work and thanks for the comment on mine
tara xxxx

Wow very intense.
i like it.
great poem