This is Excellent! The level of your writing is just so cool.

keep 'em coming

Wow
this is great!! I love all ur writtings.. 5/5
kk keep writting.

Wow, totally different than what i was expecting. excellent word choice also. the only thing is instead of "unhuman" i think it should be "inhuman" but thats just my opinion :P take care XXXXX
JL