Wow. really good. keep writing. maybe longer ones. 5/5.

Not sure about this i think u shud mayb hav some rhymes and less frequent words but other than that its good.

Finished writing the poem of my father. if u have time.

I absolutely love this poem. It's amazing 5/5 none to less. take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow short but meaningful at least to me it is xox