Wonderful. this is so well written!! i love it. good work. it flows well, and its a original idea too.

Ruby

Wow hun this extremely well written and truly amazing i love it! 5/5 xox

Hey girl great write, kira has told me to read someo f your write and i havent been on in ages.. your so talented. have you heard from kirra lately please let me know how she is because i havent spoken to her in a while

I thought this poem was good. You used good descriptions and told an interesting story. It wasn't just simply about suicide, you had a lead up to it.
The only criticism I have is sometimes your poem becomes a little wordy. I think this may have been due to the rhyming. In places it does seem forced.
The first 10 lines or so I really liked. They started the poem off well, and set the images of the pain and reflection.
Good job though, thanks for sharing.

I kno this is the poem that u submitted 2 my contest..but GEEZ IT IS SOOO GOOD! it was hard 2 chose whether u got 1st or 2nd, n i want u 2 kno that it was hard, but i gave u 2nd. anyway..keep up the totally gr8 work! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Awww.... whatever you do; don't give up... alright? If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you.

Michelle

Awww.... whatever you do; don't give up... alright? If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you.

Michelle

Powerful! Very strong! I really like it, u have to pay close attention to understand all that is said, which of course is good! There where a few simple rhymes (me, be, see, you, to do kinda thing) But honestly other then that it was very strong. It was very well flowing, and very good word choice, and a nice rhythm to it, good job! **Applauds**=D 5!

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A strong poem, full of emotion, one that although is very sad, really brought something up to me, (if that makes sense), it touched me andmade me feel a way, i never feel when reading a sad poem
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Thanks for your honest comment on my poem. You did not disappoint me, in fact the opposite, I appreciate it very much. I would have been disappointed if you had lied about your opinions of my poem.
Ironically, I wasn't too keen on this write either... I think the inclusion of cutting is very cliche and did spoil this poem for me. Also, in places the rhyme is predictable and bland. On line 12 I think you meant "To" rather than "TO."
Then ending with the "she is me twist" I'm afraid to say I've read so many times it's getting tedious. Sorry this sounds harsh, but it's just my opinion on this write.

I didn't find this confusing at all. It is an excellent poem. I love the style that it is written in and the flow was great. You are reallly an awesome writer. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

OMG... your descriptions in this poem were amazin. when i finished it I wanted to cry. I have many problems with the mirror, and this reflects so much of what I see in the light... I liked this poem so much. i was drawn to teh title,a nd I'm glad that I chose to read it. Excellent work! 5/5

Ravyn

I read this poem and I was in shock! The vivid language, the way you brought it to life was wonderful! You took a classic theme and twisted it just enough to give it a new breath of fresh air!

Now this is a poem that does keep a reader's attention with something more than a cutting or suicide poem. A reflection of the speaker in which they gain some kind of acceptance or something. If that's what it is.

Spectacular. Stupendous.

It interigued me with its emotion and growing sadness. My heart literally sank down deeper with each line.

your truely gifted.

I really liked this. It was unique and kind of twist-y. Anyways, I can't wait to read more... I'm not very good at critiquing poetry just yet because I'm new, but I didn't find anything bad :)

OMG, tears are about to roll down my cheeks. I'm so loss for words right now because I have been in this situation. Awesome job!!

5/5.. I really love this poem.. I think its great how you did this one!

This poem is powerful in moreways than one u better whatch it or ur gonna end up a famous poet one day lol....love ben

I love this poem ..you are talented