Wow, this poem kept me glued. i loved it, and the style of writing. youre a very strong writer, and youre right. if you dont pay attention, you could get lost. 5/5
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Oh wow...this is a truly amazing poem...i loved it so much...it drew me in from the first couple lines...wow...it's very unique...i would have never thought of anything like this to write a poem about...all i can say is excellent job...a definite 5.

I really like this one, its my favorite so far :)

I have already commented on this one but again it was absolutely brilliant. I loved it, it still made me cry, made me feel something deep inside.
wow is all i can say

That is really sad but i like sad poems so technally its was awsome!!

I'm speechless. It's an amazingly unique way of expressing the sadness of suicide. There is nothing that should change; its perfect the way it is. Every single part of it is Perfect. No doubt in my mind.