My heart aches to be with you
but that i cannot do.
You see i hide away
even on this bright blue day.
I hide for fear of being sold out,
yet i have my doubts.
You see no one listens
and no one cares,
for me the pain i can no longer bare.
It keeps building inside of me,
waiting to be free.
and yet somehow i just know,
that the key is inside of me.
*this is my first poem so comment me and tell me what u guys think plz*
Amber ...very good for your first poem..
When I look back at my first poems I go Yikes !!!!
This site will help you alot to develope new skills and stronger poems ..
An awesome job Amber ... Keep writing ...I am looking forward to reading more ...