by Princess09 Nov 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Pitch black |
by eric
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Hey thats an amazing poem :P 5/5 :D! |
by Ariana
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This is an interesting poem, I'm glad for your explanation at the end, and i agree with the idea that you can't kill someone you care about. You put this idea into words really nicely. The only suggestion is to fix the spelling mistake - waht to what. Keep it up :) |
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I Luved This Poem! Iz The Best! 5/5 |
by Little Dot
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Great job. A lot of feeling in this, and good imagery also. |
by avery
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That is confusing. |