Wow.
i think this is your best from what i've read.
beautifully written and makes you think. amazing.
take care, xoxoxo

Wow, you're very talented, I told you I would comment after I read, *hehehehehehehehehehe* So, come read some of mine sometime, PEACE!

-*-Cherri-*-

Omg that was really good...also a lot of emmotion...fabulous! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Reading it, it was so beautiful. but if i look back i didnt quite understand the relationship. it had a nice flow but i couldnt understnad it. but its ur poem so ur the only one that needs to understand. great poem

I really like your poems. 5/5

SCARY! Great poem but that would frighten me!!! Good piece though hun :)

Okkkkk, I really like the poem but, oddly enough, it's your explaination of it that is disturbing to me. But that has nothing to do with you, it has to do with the guy! Regardless, great poem.

Tiffany.xox.

That is confusing.
Maybe he doesn't want it to be so hard on you when he wants the relationship to end.
If that makes sense.
Anyways,
I loved the poem.
5/5

Great job. A lot of feeling in this, and good imagery also.

I Luved This Poem! Iz The Best! 5/5

This is an interesting poem, I'm glad for your explanation at the end, and i agree with the idea that you can't kill someone you care about. You put this idea into words really nicely. The only suggestion is to fix the spelling mistake - waht to what. Keep it up :)

Hey thats an amazing poem :P 5/5 :D!