by ShadowDancer
I got a bit confused. i think maybe ou need to use spacing?? jsut an idea. but u have a good use of vocabluary. nice work |
by shadowlight
I agree with ruby about the spacing. |
by tender69
Here's a quick explanation, or atleast what I wanted it to say: |
by Larry
One of the best poems I have read on this site -- I would advise you to place it as an entry on the artistic poetry contest discussion board -- I urge you to get involved -- and maybe think about not using conjunctions |