Knocking on death's door

by coupon can   Nov 2, 2005


I knock once, no one answers
I look around, no one is there
Everything is empty, dark and scary
I'm afraid, should I go back?
No, I'm not going back now
I knock one more time
I hear someone coming
I started to get cold, really cold
I hear the door-knob turning
I start to shiver, why is it so cold?
The door knob stops turning
The door starts to open, really slowly
I look inside and I see nothing but darkness
Should I go in or not?
I don't know what to do
I decide to go in, there is nothing to lose
I go in slowly, I'm scared
I see a white light far away
What is that? I hold my breath
What the hell? It's moving really fast
Its getting really close
What the f.uck?

* should i make a part 2? idk...i'm thinking about making a part 2. it all depends on the comments i get. *

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  • 19 years ago

    by SaphireAngel

    Make a part 2! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry, i'm rlly hyper right now... ok, i'm good)

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    I changed my name ^^

    -pili-

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Make a part 2 cause thatd definately not finished. great start though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    Lol

    =)