I liked it especially the first five lines...but in the middle it became hard to follow because the flow of the poem was interupted...but besides that it was an amazing and heartfelt poem...Much Love...Joclyn

Nice one. i like it. plz comment on other poems of mine. much appreciated.

Aawwww a beautiful piece, Just 2 let u now u r nw on my favourites cs I think ur poems are brilliant!!!
love
beth xxx