Aww, i like it but i dont, i don't like it when people you care for wont let you help them when you can. but i do like the poem.. umm. for title ideas... um's "gift i could not share" that be my idea. more people should help damnit! but =) im first. yay

Wow...i kinda like the title "rebirth" for this poem...i don't know it just came to me...i loved it thoe...the same thing happend to me only not with my baby but with my best friend....5/5 for this one

This is really sad though i love sad poems...5/5 i cant think of n/e thing to improve the flow was great and the stanza set up was just awsome!

I am actually lost for words with this one... all I can say is congrats on a great poem... 5/5... Tess xxx

Awe this poem is sweet 5/5 i loved it

That gave me the goose bumps!! that was an amazing poem. a lot of emotion and thought. good job. the best one i've read so far!!

Beautiful, poem
I wont take my life for granted from now on.....promise.
thank you once again
~Em