by Stumbling Shaman Nov 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sitting alone in a coffee shop |
It was great in the beginning. Caught attention and managed to maintain interest until somewhere in the middle where it nearly sounded forced for the rhyme scheme. But this was something impressive. |
I like it |
This is not crap.... |
by Void
Hey. I like to leave comments, especially when I'm impressed. And I have no constructive ciriticism as I think it is perfect as it is. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you! |
by John Bender
Great poem i liked the ryhming and flow of it. great job |