I love it...like I say...I love the first line especially...very nice...I enjoy reading all your poems...really gives me the inspiration...haha...to live life better...damn...this is so good...okey...I take back what I said on those comments I left you before...all of your works are my favourites...and all of them...are the best...lol...each of them is very meaningful...I actually can picture the scenes in this poem...very real...so real...I can't really tell it's not...or maybe it is...then again...another great work...you'll make it in the poetry world one day...hmm...maybe publish a book...that will be so cool...I'll always support you...keep up the great work... |
I dont know what to say..I LOVED IT...So Meaningful...So Sad but True..African Americans were treated so badly back then and still today are treated unfairly..I HATE RACISM...I belive that everyone is equal no matter skin color, finacial sucsess, religion, background, or education..and its BS that someppl get treated that way..sorry for such a long comment..I really get pissed when someone is being treated unfairly..Great Poem...Much Love Always...Joclyn aka Jocey |
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You have got to have one of the kindest hearts ever. i really loved this poem..it had an aweosme flow... |