I dont think words describe the intensity I felt when I read this. You write with such depth. The end really got me!!! Its as if once that cchild within has experienced abandonment it is SO hard to heal that wound both as a child and an adult. THANK YOU

Amazing job writing i had a very good visual image anyways you have alot of talent 5/5
take care

holly

Touching poem.....I love your work...excellent job!!