by Matthew A.
Good poem. Very sad and depressing that that person doesnt care about you that much and it makes you want to cut yourself. Good poem. |
Very inspirational poem.I like it.Truly depressing and your words were spoken clearly.Very good poem. |
by shanna21
I think this is an awesome poem and it seems like its straight from the heart |
I LOVE IT keep it up u roc |
by Rolo
Oh Jess, it was horribly heart wrenching. The razor...the lost love...everything was just organized into this perfect mess of emotion. Great expression, the flow was alright...but your message came across loud and clear. It hurt to read it.... |
by sarahcide
I like this poem a lot, Jess |
by Betty Boop
WOW!! So heart touchin & at the same time very emotional................ Thanks 4 commenting on mine... Kim |
by Lola Granny
Very well written my friend filled with great imagery keep up great work granny loves ya |
Hey sorry i never got the time to comment on alot of your poems and im sorry i get so freagin jelous...i was just upset and im sorry for it i love you oh and check out my thingy noy my poems but the other thing that shows who you are read it....l love you..byebye... |
by justeene
This is awsome so mush feeling an excellent job |
by Brandon
I liked this poem very much...um...Its amazing how you captured the feeling and wouldnt let go |
by Sarah
OMG Jess!! I never knew that you were the type of girl to have someone cause pain too. I'm so sorry! This was a really touching poem and I can't wait ti read more! Let me know if I can help in any way. |
by Paula
This is really good hunni and i could see it pretty much infront of me. |