I like that! I alwayz wondered if sumthin like that happened to some one close to me! My dad is a cop so i worry about him every day! Good job keep ^ the good work

Aww hun this is really sweet xox

Nice dude, I been in quite a few car wrecks, I got myself hit by like 5 cars (all of them I was walking so I got F'ed up for a while but I'm good now)

This is really touching... A little sorrowful for me to think if it has a sad ending.. But overall, I like the tension in this poem.. :)