Omg hun wow, this is so me in life right now its unbeliveable especially the verse "My parents no longer care,
They don't want to see.
That their child is really bleeding,
This wasn't how it was meant to be." its so true aww this brought me to tears its so beautiful hun your words are so touching I dont know what I would do without your poetry

A storm alwats passes by, but those who remain after, will be the strong one's.

Tim

Hey girlie
I can so relate to this poem so much...i dont want to pour out my whole life story on ur comment so i wont get into it....but i loved it 5/5

Hey babe,
you were wrong your friends haven't slipped away nor have they been pushed, at least i haven't cause your an amazing friend and i love you soooooooo much Thankyou for being there, cause i need you XOXOXO

Oh...you have so many people that love you. and by the looks of some of your other comments you mean everything to your friends. i really love each and every poem of yours... they are all so different and unique ... great work =) x

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

I read a few of your first poems and you have gotten so much better since then i really look up to your work this is incredible

My friends are in the vicinity,
I've pushed them all away.
I didn't want them to see me,
Just rotting to decay.

that's my favorite part im really glad i read so much of your stuff cause i really love your work this is awesome and i completly know how you feel on this subject you ended this perfectly i've heard songs and stories relating to the whole calm before the storm thing but i've never seen it worded this way this was awesome great job 5/5

That, was DEFINITELY one of the best poems on this site. Amazing. WOW! You truly do have talent, and every one of your poems I've read have just made me go speechless. No exaggeration, my mouth dropped. Fantastic poem. Full points, obvioulsy.

Thanks for the comments on mine. Well appreciated, and to let you know, you are in my favorites. =)

_______________________________Matt___________

No one deseerves to die no matter what the crime is.you have to make the choice whether you want some or one or if you want none.........

Stay strong and you will override this storm. I've been through all those times and am still going through them. I can speak to this really. I hide the real me for everyone else. Don't push your friends away, they all want to be there for you

Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger, and you seem to be the kind of person who can cope, judging by the amount of sh*t you've been through already! Please stay!
Luv Helen xxx

That was realli good =]] sad tho. but thats why its in the sad section. true poem, isnt it? if so, im sorry you feel this way. its doesnt feel very good =[[ but good poem.