I think this is a great poem, with a very important message.
Just a thought, but a few commas might make it easier to read?
Liking your poems, and quotes too.
*VioletRaven*

WOW! i love it! do u mind if i send it 2 one of my friends? shes been cutting and nothing i can do or say will make her stop.. do u mind?¿? =] great job!