This was another good poem by you, I think im a little too young to understand it to be honest but nonetheless it was a great poem. Keep up the great work. another 5/5

Great poem.A perfect 5 =)

Really good poem huni...
really felt you despair in this...
great hun xoxo

We have the power, to be who ever we want to be, and to take which ever path we want.
Hope you reach, your true goal.

Tim

Very deep. nice.

I liked how you made a name for the disease more or less...very neat ending, i dont know it's like to have an eating disorder cause the things i dont like about my appearence unfortunatly can't be changed by working out which is even harder cause you can't do a damn thing about those kinda things anyways lol

Reflected hate
Towards myself
Is how I look
Turned inside out

that was my favorite part, it made me think the most 5/5

Thats deep

Aww nice poem tess..great name: ssb...hope she goes to hell! keep it up
~*luv naomi*~

Hm, I've read many pieces like this...and I have the ability to understand self hate. I'm sorry you feel this way--though I'm glad you're letting it out. The flow was consistant and it was pretty good. Keep it up, and I hope you find strength within yourself the next time you look into the mirror. You're the only person who can control how you see yourself. Goodluck and take care.

~rolo

Hiya, thanks much for your comments. I liked this poem especially. Good topic, and done pretty well. Good work.
Xx Peace xX

That is reALLY DEEP 5/5 gd writin girl keep it up

Lovely poem, very inspiring. Always smile at the way you look, for we are all beautiful. Rosie xXx

Other good one...ur poems r the only ones I have read about eating disorders and they r soo good. If u want to talk im here from u.
Juls

Hmmm..

Lol woops accidently pressed submit. i meant to type:
Hmmm..that's a very good poem.
-P.A.

Great poem nice job.. :)

This took alot of feel and thought to write its easy to see great poem

Wow I like this. its really good. I just totally love it

Ur really good at writting keep up the great work!!!
Melissa

Very Well done Tess, its a really interesting way of doing this bravo:)

Jenn