That was good, keep it up |
Once again that was so deep |
Hey again... i feel so repetitive...anywho. taht was amazing work. ok, this one is my new favourite out of everything you've written. please comment on all of mine also. admittedly there are quite a few but it would mean a lot. please, please, please. be the friend i am being to you (i am a good friend) lol. |
by aliiiii
I liked it. Not as much as some of your others but it was good. |
by VioletRaven
I liked the first stanza best, it seemed more insightful, whereas I found the second to be a little cliched. However I thought that the last line was a powerful end to a very deep poem. Excellent poem. Well done as always, |