This one is my favourite
YOu are really good
LOve you

I really like this one, this part
"It brought the tides,
The storms of fire,
It fed of darkeness,
it would never tire." is my favourite. thanx 4 ur comment btw. keep writing.

Good job i loved it
5/5 u write like me
lol anyway try reading
mine sometime

I think ur a semi-goth, no need to say none of us believe you, geez. lol, that poem was awesome, man. seriously. i'm gonn read soem more now. ta ta
-Suzie

I dunno really, i guess 'they' are evil spirits or summin

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Thankyou for your time
Matt

Thats kool. Confusing a bit..but cool. anywho, 5/5