Goodbye to all...

by Neil   Nov 2, 2005


Not really my best poem but this is what I feel so yeah

I must say good bye,
To all of you,
For at this time,
I must die .

To say the least,
I must remove this tie,
That bonded me ,
all these years.

I Thank you ,
For all you've done,
But now I must go,
And take this gun.

Leave you alone,
And break your trust,
Not what I want,
But what I must.

Again Goodbye,
Good Bye Forever.
My lover,
My Friend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Omg! this is brilliant... this is my favorite part... sorta what I'm used to feeling
    Leave you alone,
    And break your trust,
    Not what I want,
    But what I must.
    I like, I like, I like!

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Aw this poem is sad but i love it. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    It is really nice

    i liked it a lot
    one suggestion tho....youo shudnt write take this gun...cos u cant take anything from here...
    instead write use this gun
    but its still fine!!!
    chek some uv mine out :D tanxxxx
    dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Very good poem im adding you to my favs
    thanks for the read
    Em

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Its just as good readin it the 2 time as the 1st..just not as tramatizing..lol

    love ya

    becca

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