by David Paul Nov 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
What do you want me to say? |
Wow...that was powerful. thanks for commenting on mine. good job, tho, seriously. you get a 5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
Heya, great poem! |
by Matthew A.
So good mr david. My poems may be weird but their good none the less like yours. Good poem. |
Very good poem David.I really like the last four lines, they really get to me. |
Amazing!! i really hope things get better.. hold on to life, you never know what it has reserved for you. take care and stay strong! |