Amazing!! i really hope things get better.. hold on to life, you never know what it has reserved for you. take care and stay strong!
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Very good poem David.I really like the last four lines, they really get to me.

So good mr david. My poems may be weird but their good none the less like yours. Good poem.

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Heya, great poem!
It expressed your feelings well and gave the full story!! Its a great write and I enjoyed reading it! Great flow and all.. just perfect.. keep it up..
x) oh and 5/5 of corse..:P

Wow...that was powerful. thanks for commenting on mine. good job, tho, seriously. you get a 5