Alone in the darkness

by shadowlight   Nov 2, 2005


In the darkness,
Of the night,
In the shadows,
Of the morn,
In the stillness,
Of the noon,
In the empty,
Dark, cold eve,
I am lost,
Alone and distant,
Here in this empty place,
People all about,
Yet I feel so alone,
Feel so unnoticed,
So empty and unloved,
Blamed for everything,
It's all my fault,
So I am here,
Empty cold and alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Yet another beautiful penned, oh marvellous! though sad but express so beautiful emotions.... sometimes life's isnt great, anyway, beautiful done....and thank you so much for your nice comment, i very appreciated! take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey, i loved this poem also. very well written and very strong-willed. one question, sorry if i'm being nosy, but are you goth?
    -Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    That is a wonderful poem...iof its tru i kno exatrly how u feel. u def. deserve a 5/5! keep up the gr8 work!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this, it was short and everything but it said a lot, i really like your style 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent
    deep
    intense
    5/5
    love
    amy

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